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Ratchet and Clank sketches 3 by Shira-hedgie Ratchet and Clank sketches 3 by Shira-hedgie
Yahooooooooo, played PS4 game again today :heart: 
whatch this gameplay to see how the game looks, its amazing > www.youtube.com/watch?v=lbu5T9…

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Critique by shinragod shinragod/critique/1490773315">Mar 12, 2017, 9:19:22 AM
If ever a Ratchet and Clank comic book where each issue was drawn by individual artists in individual styles; I'd say they should hire you as one of their artists.
Not only do you express Ratchet's wide range of emotions more so than the games do; but also you capture his appeal. Rachet may be a bad ass alien who uses bad ass weaponry. But he is also a very endearing design with adorable features to attract people to him.
The wider his eyes get, the more appealing he looks. This is particularly true when he is screaming "Watch Out!"
Expressions aside, there is also his body language. They compliment his facial expressions here quite nicely. I must say thought that the one where he is saying "Heyo!" is perhaps the weakest here. "Heyo!" is usually an expression of expressing a filthy punchline to a joke. Shoulda said "Hey!" cause it looks like he's reaching his hand out to greet someone. Also the fingers on his hand look crooked and too parted in the middle to express a greeting.
Also when he says "Ugh!" it looks like he's about to have a heart attack or he was shot! Cause other than that; the saying doesn't match the expression. He has more of a "What ME!?" look on his face as well as with his hand over his chest. Maybe he shoulda bent back more to express discomfort as he's standing up straight here.
And this expressions are indeed entertaining; but we've seen many other artists draw him in this fashion before too. Could use a wider variety of unique emotions that we wouldn't see from him and would be very surprising and more appealing.
Overall it's just an appealing look at our Lombax hero! I still enjoy it very much!
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:iconspectralclandestine1:
SpectralClandestine1 Featured By Owner 3 days ago   Artist
I love this series! such lovely work!
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:icontechnicolourscribble:
TechnicolourScribble Featured By Owner Edited May 8, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is great, gosh I love Lombaxes :D

Do you think that if I ask them nicely the government would genetically engineer me one for Christmas?........ XD
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:icondiggerpencil:
diggerpencil Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2017   Artist
I like Ratchet  hes pretty awesome  and clank hes cool
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:iconkettpot:
kettpot Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is amazing well done!
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:iconmd0113:
MD0113 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Love your art style. Great job! Thumbs up lady 
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:iconshira-hedgie:
Shira-hedgie Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2017  Student Filmographer
Thanks grandma
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:iconflaminsnowflake:
FlaminSnowflake Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my god.. it's been so long since I've even thought about this guy! This is so cool looking! :D

I really need to start actually playing the games.. :I
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:icontrickwee:
trickwee Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017
Wooow! You really draw Ratchet so well, and so expressively! Your style of him might as well be my favorite here on dA :la:
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:iconcartoonman100:
Cartoonman100 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017
Nice.
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:icongowina:
Gowina Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2017
ratchet looks cute in your art
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:icondinkaray:
dinkaray Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me gusta :3
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:icontaffywolflccomics:
taffywolflccomics Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
i remember this game
its a game i never playd XD
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:iconambergriscomics:
AmbergrisComics Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
those expressions are very cool, amazing work!
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:iconmystery30579:
Mystery30579 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ratchet and Clank: the awesome duo
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:iconaqua-lightbeam:
Aqua-Lightbeam Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2017  New Deviant
Probably the best Rathcet fanart I've seen! Love love love it!!!
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:iconflita:
Flita Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, I love Ratchet and Clank!  Been playing it since the PS2 ;)
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:iconratchetjak:
RatchetJak Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Man talk about a cuteness overload xD You draw them oh so well, just look at those awesome expressions <3
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:iconartboss413:
ARTBOSS413 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just completed R&C PS4 today, it's awesome!
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:iconthecatagorizer:
TheCatagorizer Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
Robot and Crank was my favorite anime. 
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:iconmoyashisoba:
moyashisoba Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
good job\ (๑ʘ∆ʘ๑)/
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:iconjayfoxfire:
jayfoxfire Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The game is pretty fun XD 
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:icontreythornton19:
Treythornton19 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice x3
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:iconashleythespeedwolf:
AshleytheSpeedWolf Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017  Student Artist
You should totally be in the Insomniac company, your drawings/sketches are awesome. ☺
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:iconsmartguy123:
smartguy123 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Are you suuuuuure you're not secretly a member of the CreatureBox team?
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:iconshira-hedgie:
Shira-hedgie Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017  Student Filmographer
Rose Quartz Emote 2 
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:iconk-e-y-k-o:
K-E-Y-K-O Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, les bons souvenirs. :)
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:iconanime1999:
anime1999 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool 
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:iconyoshiyoshi700:
yoshiyoshi700 Featured By Owner Edited Mar 13, 2017  Student Artist
Great work!! :)
I love your style of them both ^^
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:iconiamaphoenix99:
Iamaphoenix99 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Artist
IM FUCKING CRYING,THIS IS SO GOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!
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:iconsafegaming89:
SafeGaming89 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist
Gee, it's amazing how incredibly accurate you draw both Ratchet & Clank in your distinctive art style, Shira. XD

Lovely work as always!~ :)
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:iconsupermariofan65:
SuperMarioFan65 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Cool. I love Clank the robot and Ratchet is my favorite ^^
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:iconshinragod:
shinragod Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017
His Watch Out expression is my favorite! :D
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:iconlombaxtrooper:
lombaxtrooper Featured By Owner Edited Mar 12, 2017  Student General Artist
Nice!

check this out people: lombaxtrooper.deviantart.com/a…

also making an oc character named bolt!
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:iconshira-hedgie:
Shira-hedgie Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Filmographer
Nice exercice =D I absolutely love the :
Sad, Disgusted, Scorn, Hysterical AND embarassement / 

GREAT expressions, keep working and stay clean on the proportions =)
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:iconlombaxtrooper:
lombaxtrooper Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student General Artist
thx, but i didn't make that
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:iconshira-hedgie:
Shira-hedgie Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Filmographer
To get the other ones better, dont hesitate to push the eyebrows, their shape must create arcs and dont hesitate to rise them to "extreme", dare to do it, dont be shy, have FUN ;)
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lombaxtrooper Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Student General Artist
thx, i am having fun! just hit 10 lamas, got super lama! also, i am working on an R&C fan novel! sofie-spangenberg let me use donna and yellowdizzylombax let me use hunter! still working on oc character. i also like the ps4 game. i have a book on all of the achievements! you can get an achievement by destroying 17 street lights in the level with the invasion of the galatic ranger headquarters!
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:iconshira-hedgie:
Shira-hedgie Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Student Filmographer
Right now I collect all the RHINO cards because the last boss is f*cking hard lol
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:iconlombaxtrooper:
lombaxtrooper Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Student General Artist
haha lol. i like the groovitron.
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:iconlombaxtrooper:
lombaxtrooper Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Student General Artist
i do like some of ratchet's expresions.
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:iconthe-quill-warrior:
The-Quill-Warrior Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome sketches! As usual! ^^
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:iconflakith:
Flakith Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaaawa ! Great expressions !
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:iconakm221:
AKM221 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017
Great sketches.
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:iconshannonallaround:
ShannonAllAround Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
I love how you keep the spirit of Ratchet and Clank in your drawings. They are just so stinkin' cute! :D 
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:iconshira-hedgie:
Shira-hedgie Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Student Filmographer
Im out of character most of the time, but thanks =)
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:iconagetian:
Agetian Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017
Very beautiful! :heart:
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:icondjcig123:
djcig123 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
I love your style you did on this. I love all the expressions you gave Ratchet. Nice work. :)
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:iconshadow21wolf:
Shadow21Wolf Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love all the different facial expressions you put on Ratchet!
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:icondubstep-galaxy:
Dubstep-Galaxy Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
my b oys,,

i love love your style omfg ;0;
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